Week 8 Comments and Feedback

I feel like I have been receiving great comments from my classmates about my work. Granted I do not check them very much, when ever I do they seem to be useful and constructive. I think that my comments on the other students' posts have been good, mainly it has been pointing out what they have done well with a little bit of what I think could have made it better.

With the blog comments, I am getting to know the other students a little bit, we only get to know them through what they choose to share. I think that my introduction post gives people a good insight to me, but it isn't much.

For me to make my comments better, I would need to offer more insight into what could make help make their writing better so the feedback would be more informative.

Constructive feedback, Source

I like this picture, because it provides quick information on how to give feedback which something that we all could be a little bit better at.

Comments

  1. UnknownOctober 11, 2018 at 9:37 AM

    Hi Riley,

    I agree with your comments on feedback. I also need to check them more when possible. They have proven to be super helpful in revising my stories to create a better finished product. I also feel that I need to work on getting more specific with the feedback that I give in order to be more helpful to others.
    -Andy

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